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Ya this is all about a boy who gets hurt because hes really unlucky. Hope you like it and feel free to give any comments. Oh ya sum off this music is from flashkit.com and sum from NEWGROUNDS yay so im sorry if i dont no all the artists names
Funny But a bit pushed
I really liked it right up to the point where Timmy getting hurt wasn't his own fault. The comidy goes as soon as it becomes Malicious.
O and i quite liked the pencil style as well.
very funny... i'd say that Timmy is a retard! haha.
graphics were ok, i really think that you should have done more of what you did in the deleted scene... add colour!! it just makes the animations look so much better.
animation was pretty funny. most things were animated quite well, like the gun-the bullet, the shark, etc.
sounds were great. they were probly the best thing in the movie. there were heaps of cool sound effects in there, and they were great. also, the little sound loop that played at the start of each one was really funny!
so overall, nice work dude. i just think that you should add more colour to your work.
overall score: 7/10
(THE THUMB: UP!!)
Ya thanks for the comment as you probablly no i am not the best flash maker but i hope you like to other ones i summit by the way i didnt do coulor cuz i was looking for the pencil drawn look
animation could be better, as well as adding sufficient sound effects. but still, good job.
It was pretty good.. But if you work harder you can be very good.. Real good.. Keep it up..
You seem to be pretty decent at flash. Just work on your artistic abilities a bit more, and you could become pretty good.
A short film about a park bench
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