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UPDATE: The score just keeps getting higher huh? Thank you for the comments.
NOTE: This flash is not a comedy. It's a tearjerker if you like those kind of serious cartoons. The animation isn't the best but you can follow the story pretty easily.
1st Submission folks, I'm gettin' there!
Sorry about the deleted files too :(
Whats the song btw?
It was okay
I liked it, but it kinda needs a tune up on the storyboard and the graphic are a little funky. But otherwise good work.
It was GREAT
I've watched this about 6 or 7 times now and it never gets old, great job and keep up the good work, i know that your work will evolve into something special one day.
well, its all great and everything but...
the sketchy lines to make it look old and stuff are annoying... 5/5
This makes my submissions look like masterpieces!
The music didn't fit with the sequences. Therefore, it was pretty pointless. There wasn't really much animation, and some (if not all) layers of the drawings actually overlapped the static effect movie clip. The static movie clip was pretty annoying as well.
It's nice that you created a somewhat lengthy little story and put it into a storyboard. However, I think you need to focus more on the animation quality and the syncing of the sound.
I realise this is somewhat old, but it is newer than some of my own submissions, and it somehow has a higher score than most of my submissions. Guess I reviewed out of jealousy.
bad review HELLO! =-( awww sorry that you didn't like it. Just letting you know that this was my first half-assed attempt at flash and it wasn't supposed to look good. Luckily, the people who wrote reviews and voted probably cared about the storyline and not the graphics, amazingly. I only voted on my movie the first 5 days and got bored with it. I made this in 2 days and it deserves alot more than what you give it.
the sequel u didnt ask for is finally here!
Lucy and Ben get fingered by a hobo in an alleyway. Wait...
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