Score: 3
"This makes my submissions look like masterpieces!"
date: July 21, 2005
The music didn't fit with the sequences. Therefore, it was pretty pointless. There wasn't really much animation, and some (if not all) layers of the drawings actually overlapped the static effect movie clip. The static movie clip was pretty annoying as well.
It's nice that you created a somewhat lengthy little story and put it into a storyboard. However, I think you need to focus more on the animation quality and the syncing of the sound.
I realise this is somewhat old, but it is newer than some of my own submissions, and it somehow has a higher score than most of my submissions. Guess I reviewed out of jealousy.
Author's Response:
bad review HELLO! =-( awww sorry that you didn't like it. Just letting you know that this was my first half-assed attempt at flash and it wasn't supposed to look good. Luckily, the people who wrote reviews and voted probably cared about the storyline and not the graphics, amazingly. I only voted on my movie the first 5 days and got bored with it. I made this in 2 days and it deserves alot more than what you give it.