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Well, the animation was actually pretty decent, and the looping technique was original at the time. That being said, this was all the flash had going for it. It's just a stick and dog walking by another stick and a sign over and over. No background, sounds, music, or anything to really tell what's going on in the flash. The title is called Senseless, and that is rather apt. A fun little animation that is, in fact, kinda senseless.
Nice little animation you have here, seems the loop is small though you should think about adding more sticks maybe even differant color ones, anyways it was funny, hope to see more stuff like this one, good luck
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Add a longer loop and more sticks even differant colors, or what you can do to really improve would be to make character characters so as to get away from the stick characters.
It was interesting seems like it could use more stuff though
fun short little loop, I like the playfulness of how squiggly it is, but I do think it's way too short, and that with this style you could have made a better animation by adding a story and more length timewise. Nice little scene though.
I like the style; squigglevision is always good for animating funny toons and spoofs and such. But this is just bad... again, because it's uneventful. It's a good thing you already know this is trash. If you were to use this style to make a full cartoon though, I think it would pwn.
Nothing happened a stick raised his hat to soemone and it ended, okay this is the first Newgrounds submission that used this style, but it still sucks, nothing really happened at all, you should have made it longer and more eventful and added some sound.
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