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08/22/2004 | 10:12PM EST
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1.23 / 5.00
Score Rank: #130,162 Popularity Rank: #41,379
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Blam this piece of crap!
This makes poop look good.
Nothing too new or interesting.
Not bad. In fact… I like it!
This Flash is crunk, fo' shizzle!
Woot!!! All my 5 R belong to this!
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Okay. When I was at "Valleyfair!" a while ago (Wed. 08/18/04) I bought some chocolate and carved a little person out of it and called it "chocolate person" this flash is about what happened that day from "his" point of view. Don't expect great quality please, but enjoy!
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Average Score: 2.5 / 10
"my favorite on newgrounds!!"
I WANT CHOCOLATE!!!!!
"Hmm..."
Don't know why, but I lol'd.
"K"
^^Good Points^^ At least you tried to animated this a little bit and the animations did somewhat follow what he was saying. The subtitles were necessary too.
^^Needs Improving^^ The framerate is obviously set quite low in this movie, making the animations look very obvious. I really could easily tell when a frame ended and started. There really weren't any drawings other than the line for the ground and the guy himself, and the shape tween at the end was completely stupid looking.
"Needs improvements"
it was allright but it needs improvements What improvements i hear you say? i dunno all i no is dat it needs improvements
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Improvements: Needs a colorful background. The voice annoyed me, use a different voice, maybe yours. The pre-loaders were just awful to look at. The voice seemed off at times too.
1/5