Score: 10
"Hmmmmmm...."
date: June 21, 2008
I like the collection! ^__^
But about the Eminem part, well one part doesn't make sense. Watch his guts fly everywhere while shot in the head?! That sounds like shot in the stomach more than in the head.
Instead, you should've said something like this, "They bonk him on the head! Then they took out a gun and shot him in the head and watch his brains fly everywhere.
Then the world celebrated that the World's greatest idiot was destroyed. Hey! Get back here! I wanna be a hero!"
Thought I'd help out. ^_^
