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2004 | NGTTXII Failed

rated 2.86 / 5 stars
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Aug 18, 2004 | 5:13 PM EDT

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NGTTXII - /portal/view/187621
Other failed NGTTXII cartoons - /portal/view/187835 /portal/view/187662 /portal/view/187580 /portal/view/187418 /portal/view/187602

Here's my entry for the Newgrounds Time trial XII that didn't make it in. I've changed some little bits slightly from the version I sent to luis (such as an explosion when it fades to white, and the opening shape starting off in black and white).

I have no idea why it didn't make it in, the filesize was to the specifications, I animated it in time, and I used the shape in the story. Maybe it just wasn't animated well enough. It doesn't matter now anyway, because here it is!



Rated 3.5 / 5 stars

Should have been in.

I think this should have gotten in the time trial. You need to work more on your graphics, but i think that was the only real problem with this. I also suggest better colors, rather than just using all the bright colors that are easy to select. But... i really think this should have gotten in, and he should have bumped p00pm00s3.

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Rated 4.5 / 5 stars


this could be something great maybe even make a game out of it you should get flash and make it better but i liked the preview


Rated 3 / 5 stars


it was good but u could've put more into it, maybe a storyline better sound effects and made it longer. but all in all it was good.

Dwarfer-Stu responds:

Thanks. I did have just 2 days to animate this, also before and after work. Had I made this movie for myself and not for the time trial, I would have spent a lot more time on it, it would have been a lot longer, and would have looked a lot nicer.


Rated 3 / 5 stars

i liked it but...

it could have been longer but i like it so much that i think it would make a kicking game

Dwarfer-Stu responds:

I'm not really a 'game' person, I hate coding. Yeah sure, if someone else would do all the coding I could probably think up a big storyline, make the graphics a lot better, and animate everything. But there aren't many coders out there, and I'd prefer just to concentrate on my short cartoons.


Rated 4 / 5 stars

Pretty Good

Also it was pretty late. O well, it was O.K. Did you make that song up?

Dwarfer-Stu responds:

Pretty late? I handed this in early.

I didn't make this song up, it was from the audio portal.