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Hey this is a new series im thinking of doing. Hope you like it please leave comments.. it's quite random.
I Guess About Half-Way Through, I Closed It Cuz It Made Me Extremely Bored
ok graphics, pretty funny. i like, make more but make better drawings not stick figures man...
i think that you could have yourself a REALLY funny movie here, if you just worked on a few things.
first off, the graphics. they werent terrible, but they were a bit on the 'no-no' side.
avoid those little 'toilet symbol' men. they may look a bit funny at first, but they have nothing. they are just like a filled out stick figure. give your characters faces, damn it! it would make the movie look so much better.
Also, if you are going to draw hair (or a beard), make sure it looks good. put some more time into the little things, because they will make your movie look a lot better.
The second thing i had a bit of trouble with was the sound quality. The speach volume was inconsistent, and as a result i couldnt understand everything that was being said all of the time unless i had my speakers up.
Also, it seemed like all of the voices were done by the same person (most probably you). i would go against this. but apart from that, the voices were pretty funny.
so keep up the nice work mate. it looks pretty funny, as there are multiple characters, and a funny story line.
keep up the nice work, just work a bit more on certain areas.
overall score: 5.5/10
(THE THUMB: slightly up)
kind of confusing
the voices were hard to understand and the stick figures werent that nice. thet were all blocked(maybe round them a little nex time). but the idea is ok. if you think you want to put more time into the voices and drawings i think this could be a lot better. maybe the idea will clear up in the next one because this one left me confused.
Bad audio recoding, did not go anywhere.
You were speaking too close to the mic and it came out sounded like you were spitting a lot. If the guy is on the green, he should have more messed up conversations. Like, "wooooh dude, I was like thinkin' the square root of lint is paper."
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