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This was first made last year when I first got flash, if you're going to watch I hope you enjoy crap.
This is my first Clock day cartoon so enjoy!This shows what happens when Clockland get political!Clock lovers I hope you enjoy this cartoon,clock haters I know were you live!
I thought it was alright.
But very long and noobish animation.
And WOAH no review in over four years.
It was good,but it was missing something,like music.Well,keep up the good work though!It was pretty funny.The animation could have been better though.
Happy Clock Day 2004! (58)
I liked the way the text unfolded at the start, but it kinda took awhile. Creating anticipation is one thing, but no need to slow it down so much.
Anyway, on to the action. Subtitles would probably have helped for a lot of people. Including myself, a few words were garbled enough that I didn't hear 'em. Got the gist of it, though. Interesting phone booth convo, that's for sure.
LATER! Clock Election, eh? No more King, then... Knotts has a more substantive platform, but then... "yay... boo!" whee, assassination sure does screw that up. O_o Yay for more J and Silent Bob. Anyway, the whole premise of clock elections and all is really good, I hope to see more along that line of plotness. As for this... some music + subtitles and a bit better ending = would've been much better.
Happy Belated Clock Day 2004!
Youve heard it folks!!!Expect this to be up dated with subtitals,better voices and a longer and better ending!
P.S.I think I'll just re submittit later.
Hard to hear
I can barely make out what they're saying, but when I can it's funny. Good work, but try working on the voice quality.
not too bad...
a pretty good story line! nice for clock day.
graphics + animation - werent too bad, but i do think that the clocks could have been a little more detailed. Still, there was some good masking shown. so the animation was pretty good throughout the movie.
sound - the clock voices could have been a lot better... most of them sounded really weird, and some sounded like they were whining... so yeh, work on the quality of the clcok voices.
apart from that, the movie overall was pretty cool. so good work!
overall score: 6/10
(THE THUMB: UP)
yeah your right,but unfortunately I had to make this at the last friggin second,and Im still getting the hang of Flash MX 2004.
P.S.Dont forget to watch Shifter prt.2 when it comes out :P
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a clock day story
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