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It made me feel better...Rate it what you want...But this came from the heart.
I actually get it. I mean, flash-wise there's almost nothing to speak of, since it's just a bit of text to music. Still, for something to give someone that kind of passion is inspiring, and it's a good message to use throughout your life. Certainly different than your typical Newgrounds submission.
Well one thing is for sure and thats is your passion for what you are trying to say here, it feels like you have had a sudden life changing moment and that something nice to see captured here on flash, like an archive of what you have been through. As a flash production though, its not the best, just text and the beginning of an eminem song, some presentation value would have gotten your feelings across better.
This was nice
This was actually nice, it was lacking more "VISUALS" could use some action aswell but you have a good idea here, better luck next time
~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Add some more animating like characters and such atleast some more visuals
Entertaining and a good idea, but needs abit more
It's very true and good wisdomto take to heart, nice song choice as well, but an instrumental version may be better when you have people reading text, also, although the quote IS good, it may haver been better suited to have been put on your newspost than to have a flash devoted to it.
A starving village ask a water spirit to help them.
Strawberry clock forgets his ticket on the train but maybe he'll be ok
a clock day story
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