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">:) more prey"
date: October 24, 2007
bad me: ok first off, you need to look at possibly all of the tutorials on newgrounds before you even attempt flash ever again, i mean come on, mation tween are the easiest thing to do in flash, and you pulled them off terribly, i would go so far to say that that is the worst i have ever seen someone use motion tweens, if you put any effort into this, ill eat my own HOUSE whilst INSIDE it, in ONE mouthful, i would go far as to suggest that you turn of your computer, turn around and run, and never stop, just so i never see anything this terrible from you again.
good me: okay it needs alot of work,look at some tutorials, theres a whole section, work on the graphics, animation, erm crappyness and imrpove them all, try searching on google images to see what things actually look like, and when was the last time you saw a bullet go like this: ------------________---'''''''''? bullets tend to go in a straight line, remember that. oh, and please dont submit anything to the portal unless your SURE it is as good as most of the stuff on here, the portal is slowly filling up with crap, dont add to it :) and dont flame me, i gave you 2 different kinds of reply >:(
