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Well, this is my first submission to Newgrounds. Although I'm not totally new to Flash, I am pretty new to what the Newgroundians like. Please give me your input on this movie, so I can improve.
Small file size, but over 2 min. long!
i really liked it! very weird, and origional.
the intro was really cool, and the movie itself was quite funny!
graphics - were sweet. all of the little alien dudes were really well drawn, and they looked something like the Alien Hominid character.
animation - was great. the little dude walking was awesome, aswell as all other characters movements.
overall, i quite liked it. looks like the beginning of a good double, maybe more part series? well, good stuff!
overall score: 7.5/10
(THE THUMB: UP!!!)
I didnt get the story line
Good animation but
i swear the chalk looks like a joint in that
i really liked the colors you used. the music was good, but could be better. umm sequel?
Good but not great
I thought it was really good, but here are a few criticisms i have of it:
- music didn't seem to fit, it was to fast for that darker type of flash.
- it was kind of boring after the first few seconds of walking. make that sequence shorter.
- didn't seem like a good place to end, even if there is a sequel, which i hope there is.
thats all for me, good job, but take peoples advice when making the sequel.
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