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great poem! I loved the song and images you chose to go with it, everything fits perfect together. Keep it up
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music is by Watership Down
for those who had trouble reading it during the movie, here are the words to the poem
what thoughts do you conceal
behind my eyes of mourning
colorful luster
hides behind words, dark and grey
by no wind can dark clouds be driven
my deepest sorrow flows through empty veins
like the mist resembles the rain
your memory has been fading
all your vows are broken
laughter echoes through the door
how could you ever forget
the ones you decieve
i feel the weight of the cross
one day
i'll be nailed as a saint
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Deep shit
Really good, i thought the song went perfectly...i added to my faves!
not good
it was pretty bad, but your efforts were noticeable and adequate.
Pretty good
very nice. I liked the musical aspect and how it tied in.
if your going to make a slidshow, use powerpoint
watching that made me feel like i was wasting my life, not in general, just while watching that flash. make something a bit more exciting and with more things moving then words. i'm sorry if you did have actual animation at the end or something, i just got too bored to watch it to the end.