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We've all got that Special 'very First Something', well, this is my very first Flash animation. It's the sequel to my successful GIF animation: ROBBER!
NOTE: This is my first animation, so please, be kind in grading me! I know you aren't a mean facist no-heart, who's goal is to be simply a greedypuss.
would have been funnny, if when the gun spun, it shot him.
and would have been better, if you didnt use, a stick, however.
i liked the loading screen, and the tlaky box thing.
that was..... interesting. but seeing as it was your first flash....
A nice start to things, heh. Nice and simple. Have emoticon-like heads on the stick figures doesn't seem like such a bad idea either, looking good, keep up the good work!
Not too bad, i liked the violence n the humor was pretty good too. The animation was good, but the graphics lacked just a little in the detail dpt.
Hope to c more from u!
Before I begin, I must ask: Are you sure this is your first flash, Glitch? The date seems to indicate it was released a short few months ago. And if it is indeed your first film, then why release it now, knowing it wasn't good enough for NG? Ah, well.
In any case, the black truck says it all: "BAD". At least there are stick figure cartoons with actual pacing and recognizable images; this was little more than a menagerie of shapes and lines floating and bumping into one another. Tick reference? YAWN. The best Tick reference in a flash film to date is Toxic the Machine's Chocolate Niblet Beans, and you're not beating his record.
In conclusion, I am disappointed that you would release something like this, knowing full well that it doesn't even come close to your later stuff (and that's saying something). Keep practising is all I can reccommend. And try not to release stuff as obviously unpolished as this if you want to be taken seriously; that's all I can say.
It's my flash... not my first submitted one... although, I may have done some with Flash 4, come to think of it...
It's a horrible sequel to an Animated .gif. Hey, I reiterated myself. AGAIN!
Why'd I release it? To compete with crap.
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