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It's a animflash series.
there will be 1 prologue and 24 episodes.
nb:thanks for all the newgrounds user
This is the first episode I've seen in the series, and I assume you recieved inspiration from the televison show "24". Just like the show, the idea of each episode passing in real time is cool.
The characters in the movie are sadly not drawn very well. By that I mean they aren't very proportionate, and you seem to rely on basic shapes for body parts. A cirlce for the head, a rectangle for the torso and limbs, with a few alterations for clothes and hair. The Animation is a tad choppy, and the action is extremely unbelievable. To jump into a door, knock it down, surf down the hallway, and shoot people dead with one shot may sound cool in concept, but there's just no way it's going to happen. Also, to dodge bullets while propelling yourself upward by shooting a shotgun downward, and then shooting people with the same shotgun without budging an inch is also a bit rediculous. If you can launch yourself in the air with a blast like that, you won't be able to fire it without blowing your shoulder out.
My suggestions are to improve your drawing skills, and perhaps work on your suspention of disbelief. That is, make me believe that what your main character does is humanly possible. Peace, I'm out.
that was cool and ti answer iqueloque :can't you read the author's comment
It indicates thjazt there will be 24 episodes
Are you planning to make 24 episodes of this?
I like the idea alot and the graphics and sound weren't horrible but I think that if you could improve them this would be a great flash. The graphics were pretty good but the movement of the character could be better but it did like when he slid on the door and shot the guys that was cool. I also liked the old guy in it that was so funny. The sound was pretty good I would have liked to hear some voice acting but it didn't hurt your score.
Overall: Not Bad 8
The flash is a little sketchy but the concept isn't that bad. I haven't seen the previous ones yet but i'll check them out. The real problem was the dialogue, it didn't even all make sense. Not bad though.
the sequel u didnt ask for is finally here!
Lucy and Ben get fingered by a hobo in an alleyway. Wait...
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