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More episodes will come..each one getting better..I HOPE...This one was a trial of my FLASH skiziles, hopefully i did an ok job. This may leave you confused, so stay tuned for the next episode.
Drawings need work
There's some cool stuff in it. I like the camera angles, like looking up at the castle and walking under the, gateway or bridge or whatever. It was really set up like the introduction to a good movie or something. But... The drawings and the animation need a lot of work. If you really want this to be good, you just need to draw all the time to get better.
Not bad at all :)
If this was to be devoted to an RPG game, I'd understand, but Nailo is still a cool movie through and through. Where did you get the music from anyways? Legend of Mana?
That was very creative but you need to give more background on the game/ players and other things. What did you mean when you said "train" and why are these two fighting.
am i the only one who ever leaves CONSTRUCTIVE reviews on ng left?
anyways.. You don't need a good mic, just get an audio program called Audacity, i have crappy mic, but crappy mic + audacity = decent (if you do it right).
I liked some of the artwork.. but I don't like the part where you cut off
You didn't leave anything for ep 2 (maybe one of the mages struggling to get up or something.. i dunno)
and i cought that little layering problem as he was walking into the castle.. thought no one would catch that huh?
you get a 10 for humor because the voices were just THAT bad.
as far as the animation goes, it was like still frame to still frame. you cant just take a comic panel by panel and throw it up there and then call it a movie, what the hell is the point in that?
maybe to get the benefit of using voices, which you should not have done to begin with... not with those voices anyway... and not with that piss poor microphone.
A starving village ask a water spirit to help them.
Strawberry clock forgets his ticket on the train but maybe he'll be ok
a clock day story
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