Interesting
Teh graphics are ok, in the begging the background looks shaky. BY that I can see the drawn lines on the mountains. This could of used more movement by then characters, not the camera.
Author Comments
This is the first episode of a new artistic series I am making called War of the Mechanus. If this does well I will make more episodes. If you have any advice or idea’s post them and I will consider them.
Magosis responds:
yea i have abandond this style and have adopted a more basic style of shading in my recent works that i feel is much better
Great!
Looks like the beginning of a great series!Really original aniamtion style too,well,keep up the great work!
-cd-
Magosis responds:
thanks for the kind words. ^^
Intresting
Graphics: well a some what unique style of brush style drawings backrounds, and a nice color scheme. The text explanation went well with the animations, and the effects were pretty good. A neat element in this flash was the machines, very well drawn, and shading was excelent. The plot was a bit unorganized, and from intro to begining didnt flow to well. But the the theme was well put across. Music tied in well with the futuristic like elements and images.
Overall a simple storyline, but an intresting look at soldiers at war with the machines of the future and the end of the world. More on a trailer storyline that left the ending floating, and a powerful ending sequence.
Magosis responds:
thanks for the praise
nice
but you could've made the animations more realistic.. like the skull falling off? It'd fall faster then that.
And then guys walking
looks like you used the exact same number of frames inbetween each keyframe
nice artwork though
but put some guns on the marching guys.. they look wierd like that.
i'll give you 5 tho (since i only give either blam or 5)
Magosis responds:
thanks for the tips i'll try to make the next one better
Good
Yay im not 2 sure how I got creative imput..but yay!!!!:D
Magosis responds:
you have been helping me with it for the past few days, thats how