Score: 5
"A decent start"
date: October 3, 2009
I see I am a bit late in writing reviews for you series.
Yet it's interesting to see how you've improved. I began by watching the follow up series and, seeing as this came before, started viewing these.
You have, no doubt, corrected many errors that probably can be seen here, yet I'll still critique it, basing my notions only on this episode. Perhaps it'll be of some help...
Firstly, I see you were inspired by the Little Fighter alpha series... the influences are quite clear. You have a different take on the story though! Focusing at first on the small characters instead of the actual "heroes" I like it!
The fight scene was a bit awkward - yet I can see you tried to make it longer and more interesting. That is commendable, but still kind of weird seeing them just statically beating at each other with no real effect. Also they seem to take turns to act... The LFA series has the other extreme of this - there everything is going on at once. That can be hard to do - and to follow - yet I think that makes more sense.
The story feels a bit rushed... You could have taken a bit longer unfolding it - as it is the intro to the series. It's all like - POW! They are attacked! POW! He runs away! POW! Gloves - just puts them on without any good reason! POW! Figures out he can travel through time without any real surprise in a second!
Also... I dislike the music. This is sort of an epic fantasy series. It could use some dramatic orchestral works, rather than techno beats... But I guess that's just my taste.
Otherwise - not really great, not too bad either. They took too much time to talk and the animation is quite laggy. Yet you've improved so no use of really me bringing that up.
(Still feel like reviewing though...)
