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This is Cheese Puff's second adventure. It takes place in a public bathroom... Why is a cheese puff in a bathroom you ask.. I dunno either...
Thanks for everyone who didn't let this get blammed aswell as the first one!
This one is way better than the last one! It was really funny and cheesepuff is so cute ^^
I liked this one a lot more. There was a little bit more of a story line so more happened.... Plus the cheese poof threww a fit. =D
It is like the first one, rough animation, funny, but no storyline. fix up your drawing skills and add storylines to make this successful. Also, what is with the chicken? O well, nice job.
Yup, I'm thinking of ways to add some sort of a story line in EP.3.. And I'm also gonna redraw the character's starting on 3. So hopefully it'll be better! :D
Well, ok. It was bad.
1) Original and suprising main character.
2) Sound flowed well with the animation, what like of it there was.
1) No story of any kind.
2) None of the characters have any purpose.
3) There is no apparent meaning, so the joke(s) must be the brunt of the animation. Bad jokes.
4) No explanation for why the man is silent, if there is one.
5) The cheesepuff blantantly glares at the roll of toilet paper before the defecation sound. You would think it would realize that there was none in the stall.
Overall, 3 and a 2 on the scale.
you made me think it was funny...but i didnt really laugh aloud...its much better than the first one however...keep improvin
Pilot for my new show!
A story about a worm, a beetle and a very hungry bird…
New video for you to watch, while we wait for the next plague to happen...
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