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Well this is one of my best peices of work on Flash, and i am so proud of it. The people that influenced me to do it was my friend Allan and a few other people i dont want to name. Please leave your reviews!
That was a well done serious flash, with some real meaning behind it. The tear falling from his face onto his piece of paper was good but i don't think you needed to do the second tear. The somber music was well selected. Overall a very sad little flash.
not bad, one of your better works
neat movie. a few things to work on though;
1: you could have done a little more portrayal of david's past
2: people generally suicide in a dive. that weird back-flop you made him do looked awkward
3: the way he wrote on that paper was weird
i like the psuedo-film effect you gave it. nice one! :)
Umm... Thanks I guess Tie I mean liebe_macht_frei. :-P
Sorry about the back-flop, I seriously wasnt thinking about it when I did it. It makes perfect sence an I personaly think its better without a portrayal of his past... Anywho this submission is old and now im on a new one which I fell will never be finished but one day it will. Get ready for my Horror flash people you'll love it ;-D
this was really good, good music, good story, good effects, good graphics, good everything bassically, but its got such a low score, this is really good, and deserves a 3 something at LEAST
It was ok
and i'm sorry about my review of bullied, and yes my flash did get blammed
This is one of the best flashes I have ever seen. It would be nice if this flash was in black and hite than color.
Thanks a lot Dude!
Hmmm yeah i was trying to do the Black and white thing but it just did'nt work out!
Because i started to add colour and it did'nt look right in black and white!
An infernal battle between gold and acid.
Are you feeling it now, Mr. Krabs?
Too much coffee for Pencilmate...!
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