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Joe needs one more community service hour to graduate. Whatever will he do?
That was pretty funny. You have some good orginizational skills to put this together right. Besides the obvious animating flaws, your graphics were cool. Work on your animation technique and you'll do well.
i like your style of drawing, but i think you tweened too much. i know of abetter way of animating which involves using symbols and swapping symbols, but its too complicated to explain. you have to se someone do it inorder to understand. ill soon post an animation that does it so you se. (if you ever read this review)
thanks, and I do know what you mean. I've seen your work quite some time ago, and I really liked it (there's a review by me somewhere in there). I eagerly await your full cartoon. Frame-by-frame almost always looks better than tweened motion like this, and I hope to do some when time allows ;)
Alright...only 2 things about this flash. The character animation and your attempt to make a flash. There were MANY things wrong with this flash. the story took a long time. the lips were way off. and the character voices were sometimes soft and sometimes loud. In other words, nice try. but try harder. 4 out of 10
Graphics were good, but one thing did suck. The story, then again as another posts states " I don't go to your school" which i dont so hopefully your peers liked it better then me.
Not bad, graphics were very nice, I can tell you put a lot of work in this. I didnt always know what was going on (probably because I'm not in your school..).
What bothered me beyong belief though was that almost every sound and voice WAS OFF SYNC! Sorry, what was annoying. Also, what is up with Joe's hands?? Seriously, the way you draw hands really wasnt that good. Things should be more fast paced. When the guy fell off the balcony he fell really slow. Also, when the laser beam hit the first guy he said "Ow, me eyes" before it actually hit him. The story needed to be worked out a bit more, let us feel sympathy for Joe. The basic idea behind it was good. Mr.Jolly reminds me of that guy from tv lol :).
Anyways, good graphics (except the hands man, when the movie loaded and Joe points to the play button it's just not.. correct! :) sorry).
I'll be checking out your future work, you have great potential. I c'n see that there's been put a LOT of effort into this (drawing the characters to look like people you know and such).
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