Ok for some reason I can't upload more than 1 mb (around that) so here's the first part. This is my 3rd Flash and i hope its good enough. I've worked hard on it and if u enjoy i'll continue the series. If no well.. back to the drawing board.
P.s i use newgrounds tutorials
good.
I liked some of the scenes especially with the metroid.
There were only a few sprites used though, there could have been more for a fluent movement etc.
I liked how you made Samus love fighter that was pretty random.
However the music that was used seemed to continue after the credits and i tested this by replaying and the Riley music was still playing despite starting again, if you were to attempt more flash then I would suggest fixing these problems first.
heh
finish it, I thought it was funny, at first I thought what was a metroid doing in final fantasy, I still think it's funny.
Good, but not great
So the writing was good enough, if a bit uninspired. The banter was very amusing, though. Something about those old 8-bit guys swearing at each other really touches me. Some of the speech bubbles disappeared too fast, though, i.e.: Fighter runs into Samus. Your spelling is rather heinous, a pet peeve of mine. Looks like a few people hated the music, but I thought it fit the whole 8-bit theme. With that in mind, maybe you should ditch those 18-bit sprites that show up. They don't fit. Beyond that, pretty good. I'm interested to see where it goes.
Pros: funny dialogue, fitting animation, music
Cons: inconsistent sprites, bland story (so far), spelling
Suggestions: Take some time to give some depth to the story (if that's what you're going for), and ditch the non-8-bit sprites.
Preeety good...
I'm liking it, but I would sort a few things out. definitely the abbreviations from texting and messenger and stuff should go. And I have a thing against Times New Roman always - any other font would make a big aesthetic difference. The music's ok - nice 8-bit nostalgic feel, but did get tedius fast. The sprite animation is fantastic though, and shows the hard work, and I want to know what happens next!
Well not bad
As I said not a bad movie although using the "internet typing shortcuts" let it down in my opinion, I really couldn't identify with the story or the concept properly. The music also got repetative and annoying very quickly, all that a side it was a smooth running sprite movie although you seem to have gone a little wrong with the frames when Fighter(forgot the name you used) finds Samus when she first speaks to them.