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This is the first real attempt I have made at flash, and the first serious cartoon I have made. It's a personal subject. Any feedback would be much appreciated.
The movie was excellent. It gave me a depressing feeling. I don't think i've ever seen a flash movie in this style. EXCELLENT WORK!!
while it was loading i saw that it used Boards of Canada and i got really excited. i thought i was the only other person that listened to them. VERY nice choice of music. even the comic interlude of others was perfect. the storyline was great too, i don't think i've ever been that depressed, but this movie certainly helps me understand and when he was all crumpled up on the floor smoking weed i totally understood. it just doesn't make you feel like ever getting up. VERY WELL DONE FLASH. the graphics were astounding yet simplistic. high points for style too! wonderful work.
p.s. Aphex twin rocks!!! (the poster in Scribbler's room ;))
Very good stuff!!!
I like the way you conveyed the sadness of this life in a subtle yet deliberate way. You got your message across fairly well. The message that using drugs of any kind is NOT AN ANSWER may need to be clarifed somewhat. I only say this from reading the prior reviews, where some people dont get it.
You have a future here at NGs.
I look forward to your next piece(s).
BTW, I gave you a five (5).
Makes me feel lucky!
A very sad and deppressing story line. But for what it was, not bad. Think u would do well making a comedy sketch, try it.
It was just alittle to depressing! I was very impressed that you took times to make a decent flash that looked unique. The only suggestion I make is work on some of your dialogue like I found it kinda corny when he said alcohol and weed make him feel worse why would he use that stuff if it makes him sick? Overall not bad
guy drains his main vein.
The first episode of my original anime
Two Men Fight to the Death!
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