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This is the first real attempt I have made at flash, and the first serious cartoon I have made. It's a personal subject. Any feedback would be much appreciated.
It was just alittle to depressing! I was very impressed that you took times to make a decent flash that looked unique. The only suggestion I make is work on some of your dialogue like I found it kinda corny when he said alcohol and weed make him feel worse why would he use that stuff if it makes him sick? Overall not bad
quite funny but try to make it a little LESS DEPRESSING! like your style n hope you make more less depressive flash cartoons in the future
Nice technique man!
I think im going to add this to my favorites... it really tripped me out and it had great meaning! I feel so good from that funny ass shit make a sequel or something man, your genius
That was excellent!
Pretty good for a serious flash. I think you should stick to this kind of stuff, its pretty good. Although, the character design was kind of off...
ha. that was very nicely made. the art was coool in it. nicely drawn. and the music went well with it. and it was sorta funny at parts. i only wished it was longer and had more of a plot. so what does disorder he have?
An indirect Sequel to "The Artist" shows the life of the salaryman
Cornelius & Toots are back, and a Haunted House Ride seems a little spookier than usual!
this one isn't funny
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