Well, this is it, the very fraction of the beginning of my epic. This'll just intrigue you a little, and hopefully get you excited for episode 1!
I know, I can't draw very well, but I tried to make up for it with a rich story, detailed animations, epic music and a few extra special effects. I'm sure you'll enjoy it. Please look forward to the first installment.
Before anyone asks, I'm not copping out on the gun-fight, just saving it for the beginning of episode one. It's going to be awesome! Also, the bubbles during the gun sounds are supposed to be there. Thanks for watching!
Pretty good for a first flash
hey ootc, thie is alright for a first flash,you did a good job with the sound's music and voices. You gotta work on your drawing skills(which are already better than mine!) O cant wait for the first,good luck at getting better! Overall good job.
good for a first real flash...
ive noticed a gradual improvement in your work! to be honest, i only just watched your other 2 flashes now.
but this is the best of your 3 ill give ya that!
3/5!
Thanks! I'm learning a lot of new things as I make this series so expect it to get even better as it moves along. Thanks for the review!
not bad
cool addition to the other desolation flashes you got.
Needs alot of work
I definitely think that really good writing can still make this an interesting story, but the visuals and sound are really bad. I think this is going to detract from it alot. I know you probably have a really great story to tell here, but it's going to lose alot of it's power because of these problems.
Hmm
ok well im going to give you some slack this is your first real flash. Voice acting sucked i dont mind graphics unless story is good the story for this episode made no sense im sorry the music didnt really match i gave you 5 for effort
Don't worry everything is going to be explained in episode one. Our voice acting is usually pretty good, I just had to pull in someone else to do the voice for that nerdy guy.
If you want to see the better voice acting check out the teaser I made before.