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My first ever animation. I dont like it as much as I used to, as I was just starting to learn Flash at the time, and Im much better now, but I still love my friends voice acting.
THE FLASH IS VERY GOOD. IT SHOWS WHAT YOU CAN DO, BUT YOU NEED TO MAKE IT LONGER AND MORE OF A PLOT. KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK AND MAKE THIS ONE LONGER.
I made this years ago, it was my first attempt at falsh. It was fora class and could only be a certain length. I dont think ill be making it longer, as i havent touched it in years.
The only thing I found wrong was that it was very short. It seemed like the action figures could've been from a show, if maybe like you started making a series of A.S.S. of a cartoon show or something it'd be funnier...And longer. Otherwise, it made it laugh for a short while. Good job.
Thanks for the nice words. This was my first attempt a t Flash when I was learning it in class, it was only allowed to be a certain length.
Pretty good. Very nice artwork!
This movie was pretty good; though it has its pros and cons. I really liked the artwork in the movie, pretty nice painting there; but the animation could have been a bit more smoother. Another element in the movie that could have been improved would be the voice acting, because it sounded it bit choppy. It also could have been longer too, but hey, it was a commercial.
+ Very nice artwork.
+ Nice painting of Wolverine and Optimus Prime.
+ Nice attempt and effort put in this flash.
- Animation could be smoother.
- Voice acting was a little choppy.
- A little short (but hey, all commercials are usually short).
Overall, I thought this movie was pretty good, and pretty much above average. When I first saw the A.A.S., I thought about the Master Chief from Halo, because their suits almost looked like his. Although A.A.S. was good, I thought Lockheed was better. Keep up the good work.
Thanks for the feedback. I decided to put this one up because its my earliest Flash thing (2001). I stuck Lockheed up when I first heard of this site, but now Im putting the rest of my animations up in the order I made them. Lockheeds better, because my Flash skills have improved.
good art, but lousy 'ad'
too loud, too fast, and you insulted optimus prime!! whats wrong with you?! prime, is well, PRIME
I didnt mean to inult Prime, I just had to use my favorite toys from my chilldhood in it, and Prime and the Transformers were the greatest toy line ever! I still got all my old Transformers in my cupboard.
well drawn for your first flash man very well drawn gj
A starving village ask a water spirit to help them.
Strawberry clock forgets his ticket on the train but maybe he'll be ok
a clock day story
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