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I worked for over 15 non stop on this so i hope you guys really really like it...enjoy. ow yhea...i know that it's humorless lol:P but i just wanted to make a short. The next one will be alot better!!
That really sucked. Leave the animating to the better low lives.
it's pretty good, but a little short.
i can tell you worked a lot on this. for 15 hours, it's pretty good. hopefully you'll put some more of these stan and ran cartoons out, but work on length. the voices could have been a bit louder, i had a hard time hearing them over the music.
keep up the good work.
Good for you for putting in all this work, but the whole concept seems like it's a more human version of Weebl and Bob done wrong. Not very well written, sound wasn't good (opening song was alright), and the story/punchline was just not funny or substantial. Better luck next time.
you wrote "I worked for over 15 non stop on this" I'm guessing since it's about 15 seconds long, that you only worked 15 MINUTES on this. Try harder next time, and actually add length and plot.
It needs work. A lot more stuff. A way deeper plot. Nothing happens in this.
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