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This is my first actual attempt at making a flash worthy of watching. It took two days, and I'm not so 1337, so please be kind. Please review so that I can improve my style.
I'm gonna make a series if you guys like it. Please advise!
Episode 2 out now: "Hacking"
That as very random. I looked at your comment so i'm gonna give a few tips even though i've never made a movie.
Try and put a little more shading in
Give it a backround
Try and vary in music
THat's all the tips a for you. I hope they help. But this is good for your first try. Keep up the good effort
Varying music in a thirty-second flash would get really annoying and disorientating and any more shading would make the silly stick style lose form and wouldn't work.
A background wouldn't hurt, though.
This was wierd!
I will come back every day to gaze upon it's wierdness.
It was ok.
Thanks for the review!
I am glad it was OK, and it's supposed to be Weird!
Be sure to check out the sequel.
To bad it didn't tie in with the intro story. That is a great concept you have with the pencil look, keep up the good work.
I thought it tied in fairly well... What with him not understanding terminology and thus getting confused as to what "CD Burning" is...
Oh well, thanks for review!
This is the first time I've actually seen a stick figure with more than eyes and a mouth. It looks like you put a lot of effort into the graphic, very nice. Like the last reviewer said, make it longer! If you're going to make short movies like this, I'd advise to make a bunch of them in one movie. Or just make one longer movie. Just work on the length, and I really think this could make the front page!
Thanks for review!
Wow! Cheers for being so positive, but i'm not so sure about me ever making the front page...
Thanks, though, and I'll work on the length. The shortness is due to my inability to come up with funny content, so any input from viewers would be appreciated!!
I really like the drawings, you should make this movie a bit longer though, putting several advntures in one movie.
Thanks! I may do that, rather than a series. I'll see. :) Cheers for reviewing this!
Blue Pencilmate meets Red Pencilmate, but things don't go so well...
While taking the day off work, Lloyd and Glynis take in a movie
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