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Jun 16, 2004 | 9:19 AM EDT

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This is the first cartoon that I have ever attempted (flash or otherwise). It's pretty short, about 20-30 secs. Enjoy.



Rated 0.5 / 5 stars


that had no sence man! try making it longer and if lasts long enough, add a story line!


Rated 1 / 5 stars


It lasted around 20 seconds and gave me no enjoyment what so ever. Flash movies and games are designed to entertain people. This didn`t. Try harder and spend more time on your flash.
This movie is one which will not last on newgrounds. Viewers, don`t waste your time, you deserve better.


Rated 2.5 / 5 stars

nice, but.....

this is a nice movie for a first try! but you need to make some more action and it has to be longer :) the graphics where good! and the sound wasn't so bad to

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Rated 3 / 5 stars

It wasn't bad!

It wasn't bad, and a bit humorour but the only thing wrong with it was it was very short, as you already mention.

But otherwise its a great for a first attempt!


Rated 1.5 / 5 stars

Pretty good

For a first attempt, that was pretty good! The animation was simple and smooth, the speech was synced well with the mouth movements of the characters, and there was a little humor in it. Nicely done, I hope to see more Flash from you in the future!