Score: 7
"Potentially good"
date: December 19, 2006
This was an interesting entry, I liked the concept of this and seeing what you had to work with you were going in the right direction. The only problem is that your execution faltered pretty greatly and you could have spent mroe time on working out the little necessities.
You're doing good so far, you've captured the feel of Earthbound and added a serious tone to it, which is what you were trying to do. You just didn't apply enough of what you needed to make it seem like a serious plot. A few things that give it these problems are the dialogue and choppiness, also the spriting which is pretty bad.
All I really think you need to do is take time and don't rush yourself. These could be good if you did that, also try to implement som better dialogue, that would be helpful. We need more people attempting to do serious/darker flash's, I'm glad at the attempt, just not the execution.
