Score: 4

"put some examples"

by: lustigRaul

date: May 10, 2008

It was good, but why didn't you put some more examples. And correct me if Im wrong but in the video description it said "clay", but the video has no clay tutorials! In the action script, how do I know if I like the script when I don't even know where to put it or how should it look like. Sorry man, but you need to put more examples.

Score: 0

"All-In-One Tutorial 2"

by: dark101

date: May 10, 2008

This was horrible, it didn't tell me anything I already didn't know, and what's worse, you didn't tell us where to put all of the actionscript. like you just expected us to know.

Score: 3

"?????"

by: catmana

date: May 5, 2008

I didnt see anything on clay in there, the small discription under the icon said theres a section about clay.

Score: 2

"I'm sorry."

by: princeterror

date: May 3, 2008

And I'll tell you why: every Tut on its own is pretty bad on its own.

Advanced tweening:

Pro's:
-You gave a few good hints.

Con's:
-You didn't show an example of what the actual tween should look like in the end.
-I'm not going to lie, your shape tween looked downright awful
-You didn't cover anything about smoothing a shape tween with stuff like extra key frames in the middle and shape hints, making every shape tween someone tries to make look like your's.

Action script:

Pro's:
You gave some scripts, even one i didn't knew about yet.

Con's:
-You gave the script. There are a lot of people who just blindly except that a script does what you say. Every time they want to do it they just use your script thus making them learn nothing. When you cover a tut you should explain why and not only what. This didn't help people understanding AS.

Compression:

Pro's:
- The tut explained what it said.

Con's:
- The pic's about the properties. one had a pic of a .fla file and the second a .swf.
.fla file's are always bigger. you should at least have changed the color in photoshop or actually made a screenie of a .swf of 10mb. And next to that the color change was the first thing i see change in the pic. people could think thats what have to change whit out looking further for changes.

Newgrounds basics:

Pro's:
- Explained a lot of things.

Con's:
-Most of the time a person finds the flash tut's it already knows a bit about newgrounds. A tut on a site about the same site that is less good then the site's actual faq is pretty useless.
-And again don't just give the names about things also explain what they are. I missed that a lot at some points

Advanced Sprites:
Pro's:
-Again a few good hints. pretty useful for making sprites.

Con's:
- You named the in, out effect but explained nothing of where it stood or what it does.
-You named loads of things whit out giving enough example's.

Reviews:

Pro's:
-this one was pretty good.

Con's:
-Still looking :P

I think you could make great tutorials if you'd wipe away the con's. but please update a few of the images that are off date.
goodluck, bet you'd make the best of it.

Score: 10

"Nice Job"

by: Darthius

date: April 5, 2008

More in depth Then your first , I didnt understand the actionscript at allbefore this.