((( NEEDS MORE )))

This was ok, but needs lots of work, needs more of good feel of the content, you have a great start but needs more, maybe some backround effects and lots more detail, and downsize on the filesize for better optimazation (SP?) anyways better luck next time...

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could have been better

work on the style of the duel.

Good.....

But it was a little unrealistic with the falling and such before hes shot, but nice flash, well done.

liked, but

1) he cant fall before the bullet impact
2) wrong cadaver direction... we have to see the hut, not the feet

Good and room for improvement!

I have watched both, this one is alittle better but like a review before, the guy who is shot, is facing the wrong way. We should be seeing his head. The other thing that is in both movies is your zoom in to the gun, It changes from a old west revolver to a shot that looks like a 9mm.

Keep working on your skills, you have potential.