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Shroom and Broccoli discuss, "what is funny?" The whole conversation leaves Broccoli a little flat. You can see more Shroom and Broccoli by going to: http://www.farshot.com
((( CUTE )))
The characters are cute and funny, the text at the bottom was a nice touch, the graphics were clear and crisp, and overall it made me laugh, nice funny flash...
I vote on plot and substance, rather than just on animation. This is potentially a really fun series, you show that you can have some sort of indepth conversations in your flash, and it can only get better. Your voices and sound effects were ok, but seemed a little out of place. Your animation style also could use some fine-tuning.
Thank you for the objective criticism! I took a lot of what you and others said about working on my animation and character development while working on the latest episode. It's been completed, and I plan to do a New Grounds release Monday, June 4th. Again thanks for the review! It really DOES help to hear from others!
hehehe... damn straight it never gets old! hahah
some very nice work there mate, short n sweet. the way things should be! hahah... (well, withink reason!)... lol, that was pretty good!
T3h graphics::: were pretty average, but not too bad, because this was a short clip, i think it could have done with just a little bit mroe detail... also, i gave you a '6' because this didnt really contain that Much animation... could have had alot more.
T3h sound::: was - once again - pretty average, although easily audible, it could of been of a higher quality. it sounded a bit muffled, but apart from that it was good... also, music went well with the clip, so sound overall was Ok.
T3h style::: was pretty funny. the characters went well together i thought, the mature (female?) brocoli, who was seeking the moral of something simple, along with the humorous, quite unmature 'Shroom'... heheh, so yah, i though that the style of the movie was great, very funny.
so to sum it all up, a pretty cool, funny, short clip with some simple slap stick humor. nice work, indeed. keep it up!
overall score: 6/10
(THE THUMB: UP)
I appreciate the in depth review! I'm just starting out with Flash and plan to show improvement in every episode.
The animation isnt first class but the sound is great. Make more, maybe a series...
Thank you! I do have a series based on Shroom and Broccoli. You can see more of them at: http://www.farshot.com
I actually liked this. Funny little twist at the end. Good job.
I'm more of a writer than an animator, I'm just starting out learning the ropes of Flash. I appreciate the compliment!
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