i hope you dont think this is good
Time, composition, story, elements and fluidity are missing this is entertaining only as a gif.
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This is the second episode of the series that i have recently started about a man named Lotus who was abducted from his dojo to fight for an illegal martial arts competition, this is the second phase of the fight between two other competitors.
P.S the file is contains the song 'Green Hornet' from the Kill bill volume.1 soundtrack, it has been slightly optimized, but if you'd rather not load it, then click away now
preety good
top thingy says it all
((( OK )))
Notbad, it did seem to lack "COLOR" now you may have wanted it that way, but having color and more detailed backrounds would have improved it greatly, aswell as making it abit longer and more story like with some better dialog scenes, not a bad start though...
~X~
not bad
the movie wasnt to bad albiet short, but the music was very annoying as was the sound for the voice bubbles. it seems what is really lacking is your character, there are people you can talk to about your chronic paranoia. by he way this aint vince.
unownedJR responds:
haha, so it's his bitches doing the hard work for him? way to have your e-life ruled by a 17 yr old kid
What man?
That guy didn't really win, he had that freakin stick almost the whole time. What a cheap guy. And did he use that lever I saw in the stage?
unownedJR responds:
um, it's not about the weapon it's about the man =D. a sword is merley an extension of the soul so why can't the staff be?
the lever wasn't really anything, i just wanted to make it more like a stage than a BG by adding in extra features
btw, stop spamming my submissions with unconstructive reviews. if this is another vince account then so be it, annoy me anymore and i'll just have to take you down with one of my disses i have lined up. fucknig coward
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