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My first flash animaiton. PLEASE EXCUSE THE GLARING SPELLING MISTAKES AND THE MEANINGLESS SYMBOL AT THE START this was never actually intended for the public eye. None the less, I think it still manages to tell an interesting story, go for it fella.
I actually thought this to be quite nice. The graphics were very good for its time, especially at the start, and the music fit perfectly with the theme. There were quite a few typos I noticed, and while the buildup was great, the action scenes weren't really much of anything. For a first flash this long ago it's actually quite great work though, too bad you didn't make anything else.
The philosophical ideea is good but...
The graphic must be improove.
i couldnt get the ending, but the animation was great
A nice first flash.
This was a good first flash but it did have it's flaws such as many typos in the script and lack of detail in the animation overall especially the character designs,i didn't really enjoy this all that much cause it was more sneaking around than it was action,overall it was a nice first flash but you just need to practice more on you animation detail and be more creative but just keep on practicing and you will be better in those catagories in no time. =)
The animation and drawings were pretty cool , but the Samurai should have been japanese rather than a white guy. It just would have made more sense, also, good work on the timing of all the text, it was somewhat interesting to read and went along well with the animation, there were points of the story though, that I'm not completely sure I understood, and there was nothing really to specify what EXACTLY was happening, or why.
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