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turn up the sound and give me some feedback on what you think
The idea is great, and it does leave you hanging. I am interested in seeing the rest of the cartoon when you finish it. The animation was a bit lacking, but good story telling can always distract from the lack of artistic ability. I always prefer a good story over amazing art. Keep up the good writing, and work on those animations. =)
that dude at the beginning looks linda like "the Crow"....
it kinnda does but part2 will have a twist
That was decent. Sure, the overall quality and stuff could have been improved, but hell, it was alot better than most of the shit I just watched (stick figures and scribbles). You shouldn't have rushed the end though... Anyways, don't let these assholes (that vote you 0 and don't even make their own movies) get you down... You put effort into this and it deserves more than just a 0.
thanks you for the good review
hey. i liked the begining. with the melting/changing picture. and the cross thing. the sound was great. the only thing is your graphics were... not that great. try to work more on those for the next part of the movie. spend more time on each frame. it looked as if you really rushed the last few scenes and didnt put that much work into them. well, good luck on the sequel
thanks and i wont lie i did rush the last scene. I had to finish this so i could concetrate more on my 3d animation. thanks for the feedback
It's been done to death.
That whole "Guy walks up to grave. Talks in his head about that person dying. The end"
A short film about a park bench
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