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My first flash animaiton. PLEASE EXCUSE THE GLARING SPELLING MISTAKES AND THE MEANINGLESS SYMBOL AT THE START this was never actually intended for the public eye. None the less, I think it still manages to tell an interesting story, go for it fella.
i'm not quite sure what the last guy was talking about, its really not that good, its quite good, but i think you could of made more effort, it was basically all motion tweens which made the animation look quite bad.
I thought it was pretty cool. I think you need to work on drawing people a little. They weren't that bad though.
Easy on the Motion Tween
I loves the lighting and the other effects that flash can provide. You did real well in editing. Only thing i didn't like was the drawing of the people and how everything is an object. It's easy to just motion tween everything, but it looks better if it's freehanded each frame. Really good for a first animation film, but really bad as your only one.
Not too Bad
This was overall a good movie and even though there are a message still manages to be understood. But iam sure had a bit more work and fine tuning been added this would be a fgreat flash.
that was soso. the animation wasnt too good. how come the dude didnt have a shirt? and his sword seemed more like a katana than a samurai blade. but that is a techinicality. not bad for a first work. keep tryin and ull get good.
Second-Year Animation Film (2015)
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