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Please don't vote or review this movie yet. I'm replacing an old crappy one, but I haven't finished this one yet.
That's all? It's a shame because the graphics were actually very impressive for its time, and it looked like you had a good idea going. However, all it was was the beginning of using a lockpick, and the flash lasted all of five seconds. Had you had a finished product it clearly would have been well-received based on the bit that we get to see, but unfortunately that's not the case.
Needs more work
Could have been better if it was finished it has a good idea around it but needs more stuff and content, like more characters props scenes and so fourth, so work on the idea you have and work around it, keep trying and practicing and it will be pretty good i think.
~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
as stated, you have an idea here now just add more effort all around that idea, much more content and so on, practice practice is always the best medicine in flash
an ok idea needs more effort though
Did you even read the guidelines for submission?
I highly doubt that you read the flash submission guidelines, because it explicitly says DO NOT submit unfinished work. It tells you to submit it to NG Alpha instead.
Not even done
You shouldn't upload shit until it's finished, cause this looks like it could have been good, but if people see this, once you upload the finished piece, people will assume they've already seen it and not even watch it.
Don't submit unfinished work
This really does take the piss out of the whole don't submit unfinished work thing, it's like 5 seconds long, it's some guy's face then a lock being picked, there's nothing to it, form the 5 seconds I saw it looks like the final version could have been a good flash movie, you shouldn't have bothered submitting this, you should have finished the movie and then submitted it.
This is the most stupid unfinished work thing I've ever seen.
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