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I think Newgrounds has become too corrupt in its ways and I can no longer get a real review on my work, thus I'm leaving, most people wont care but *Typo it back see it here:
I'll be releasing a new cartoon reviews similar to Edge on there soon, hope to see you there
((( NICE STYLE )))
This flash was decent and has good style like with the art and music, maybe abit to short but still good, my only real problem wa sthe "TEXT-BUBBLES" while its cool to have subtitles, it slows down the movie feel of the flash, i would suggest make it sow you dont have to click to go to the next one, just let it flow on through like a movie, anyways good movie even that ending hehe...
Not very original
I think that the plot is way too overused. Your artwork is not nearly detailed enough. I think actually voicing in peoples lines might help, but it might make it harder to follow... so, i dont know.... Just an opinion.
...i'm sorry...plot over used? A guy is acused of helping the forces of the Underland and thus is chased out of a sky city where he jumps to what he thinks is his death? AAAAAAH, so THATS the next pixar movie, must be as I aint seen ANYTHING like that before :-/
Although I do acept your opinion and agree that It needed voices
Your backgrounds are ok, but need to have more detail. They look like they are 1D. If you could make them look at least 2D that would help alot. I like the style you use in this. I am going to make sure to watch parts 2 and 3. Good stuff here.
Your author comments make me laugh.
well glad you like the comments ^_^ nice to know someone reads them. Sadly as I have said before I cancled part 4 as I felt the series was becoming too much for me with a mix of people exspecting a sertent level or quality (although in my view not high) and I felt in the rush to get parts made I had messed up the original plot :-(
id love to help u with ur artwork...i like teh story, im doin somethin, but its more religion oriented...thought ur story is fuckin coo too....hit me up on aol , DUCE1312, i can show u some of my artwork and u can decide if im worthy if ur considering taking up an artist
well if i dont get aorund to contacting u please aply at *Typo!
It was ok
It was ok, It should have been a bit longer. you should also work on your drawings because the backgrounds didn't look to good. but other then that good work! :)
The backgrounds r gonna stay int he same style but more detail form part 4 on i hope
Pilot for my new show!
A story about a worm, a beetle and a very hungry bird…
New video for you to watch, while we wait for the next plague to happen...
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