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Another Stick Figure Death animation
This was rather basic, but it wasn't all that bad. The bike looked rather nice, which was funny since everything else was just the stick and the background, which just looked sloppy as it was. The animation was decent enough, and the effects were ok as well. I also had to admit I laughed at what the stick said, since it was unexpected. No plot development or anything like that which could have made it better, but it was nice for what it was.
Needs to be longer
This was very short so add more to it especially with the story, you do have an idea here you just need to expand on it, with dialog, much more depth in the story lots more in that area but start with the story, there is a number of stuff you can do with this, so work on some stuff and show how much you can do with it.
~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
well like i said the story does need some depth to it so start there
Needs some more effort especially with the story
too short and kinda boring to the point that it doesn't really hold the audiences attention too well, your drawings were ok I guess, but the overall impression was kind of dull. It wasn't a bad stickdeath, it's just not really my thing.
the funny thing is when he die XD
Thats gotta HURT!~!!!
ASTEROID HURLING TOWARDS EARTH!!!
tasty crunch of yummy cookie crumble
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