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a noir shortfilm that takes place in a scenario called "nightcity".
Well, it sure wasn't a total bust. It was short, and slightly sweet, but I still think you could have done a little better.
I did like the music and the animation was pretty smooth, but, uh... what was the point? Guy meets hooker, guy bones hooker, guy kills hooker, guy regrets killing hooker? No message, incredibly short, and the art style is nothing new to the world. Also, rated E for everyone, huh? There's blood, smoking, drinking, and I saw a nipple. Oops.
Nice execution, though. Try to come up with a unique atmosphere and deeper story, and you could hit it pretty big.
The music and animation match. nice color choices. It was pretty cool.
The music fit and art style was nice, also it was overall a nice short animation. I would like to see you do more of these.
Really nice job!
Loved especially the part when the woman begins to flirt and than the unexpectable; the man take out his gun and bang !....bang! bang! he finish the kiddy woman.
Also good animation speed and it's all noir !
Health Reminder 3: The Unfixable Thought Machine
This is oil story... The real trend of the world. How Tuk uses oil to solve his problems?
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