Score: 8
"Good movie, but as you said, a bit short"
date: April 27, 2004
I'll start by saying I commend you on doing a stick fight in claymation. This is the first I have seen, and the fact that you were able to create something like this is good. The background, however, could use something else. Definitely looks like the table in someone's room. Perhaps you could create sets? Just an idea.
Sound quality was good, coulda been a little less grainier, and if you just cleaned up the animation, got a new background, and maybe lengthened it a bit, you would have a great movie.
Author's Response:
Yes it is indeed a table. I wouldnt know about making a set, I will have to consult about it or something, or to do the shooting in another area, since The computer is a laptop this would be possible. Thanks for your comments and constructive critisism, I will keep it in mind when I do the sequel to this. Probably wont be able to do the ~set~ as of yet, But in a future it may be in my plans.
Thanks.