Deep?

Well, I don't think, the term "deep" fits the plot very well.
"Broken saints" has a deep plot, but not this standard born-as-the-last-of-a-superhuman-race story.

Hmmm, I wonder...

This looks to have great potential. The animation is a particularly large downfall, Work on that but I can't do that good so no substantial complaints here. The music was awsome and this has set up a platform for what could be the first seriouse series of any depth I've ever seen on new grounds, I look forward to #2

Ima have to be hard.

Becaue this is so good, im going to have to be hard on you.

First of all, i dont know anyone that could run at a 45 degree anngel, also, there arms move up and down with the chest and neck when running. Voice for the second Ghost thingy, kinda doesnt fit who they are.

Also The backround is kinda vague, not much to look at, at least add clouds or somthing. also, rather than making more, i think you should expand on the first one...

Good stuff

Very cool, though very vague. The viewer has barely attached themself to the main character, but the style of your video makes me want to watch the next episode. And hopefully the next after that. :D

Pretty good!

This is good, I enjoyed watching it. The only thing is, you need an introduction of some sort, just some basic history. It wouldn't take up that much space (memory), all you'd have to do is use your "spooky" font and write some "ancient" stuff. Y'know. But I liked the voices.

In reply to Tauk's review, I believe that flash creators should make a "Trailer" and submit that first to Newgrounds. Therefore they will recieve feedback, and decide whether or not to go on with it.

My brain hurts...