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Updated again: I finally had the time to reply some of your reviews. Part two is now around 6 mins long & will be coming out around early May.
Updated: Wow I can't believe I got 3rd place. Thanx for all who supported me. I feel like talking in some freak'n Oscar lol.
Like always, I suck on the voices but this is the first part of my mind-exploding thing but before I do that, I've to do that boring main idea part.
Could be a top 50 I think
As said b4 your voices arent up to par with your animations. I like this whole idea you have here and better voices would really clean it up. Also the story moves a bit too fast at times. With a little work in those areas, I think your next flashes could be holding scores of 4 or higher even. Anyway Great Work I give it a 5 for great original artwork and fk.
maybe you guys should go through puberty before trying to make another movie
The way every thing looks is allright, but you should just estabilish that all the charicters are children if your going to use that cast of voice actors.Also, since you mentioned that you sucked at voices(you'll get better) than you should avoid complicated shots like that back and forth dialouge between the blond guy and red guy. There were a few moments of the voice effect that seem off.I have no idea what the real age of the the voice actors are so please tell us.
The plot/story is really impressive, too bad the sounds/voice acting couldn't live up to it. But overall is still worth watching.
Pretty good! :)
The intro takes too long, but the storyline is really good though,( i promise you i don't have a short attention span)...but anyway i will favourite this, hopefully the next chapter is just as good, if not better! See You There Chump!
Detective Nwar gets his hands dirty for a political campaign.
My virgin dad 2!
A quick prologue to AoP2 (AoT Spoiler Warning)
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