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Updated again: I finally had the time to reply some of your reviews. Part two is now around 6 mins long & will be coming out around early May.
Updated: Wow I can't believe I got 3rd place. Thanx for all who supported me. I feel like talking in some freak'n Oscar lol.
Like always, I suck on the voices but this is the first part of my mind-exploding thing but before I do that, I've to do that boring main idea part.
These Egocity movies are getting better.
Your graphics have gotten so much better and it had a slower pace than the other ego city movies but i would'nt call it boring like the last reviewer did.
I'd call this flash very nicely craft and an interesting storyline.
I can't say the movie was too short or too long it was at just the right running time. You end the flash when we begin to want more and that's what is helping to make your series into a success.
Keep making those good movies and congrates on your first portal award you have earned it.
Wow, that was great!! Just a couple of things...
You're really really talented, and I liked the story. But you should try to be more clear about telling the story - ie: make the plot points and what's going on much more explicit, and flow a bit better from one to the next. For example, during the scene where the red lazer was pointed at the character's forehead I wasn't clear exactly how those characters fit into the plot, or exactly where the lazer was being aimed from. It was just a little too fast. But good job overall. and nice animations!
The flash is so fuckin hilarious, I love the ending I was laughing so hard.
OMG YOU RULE!!
YOU GET A 5 on the voting chart cuz my last name is also CHU!!! OMFG what a coincidence and yes ur movie was good. That is all YOU ROCK u represent tha chu's!
Nice style, nice plot, excellent graphics.
Oh, and I know you got that little ditty at the introduction from NQ1. Nice place to put it.
Second-Year Animation Film (2015)
If you try eating the Mouse Cleaning Service, you gonna have a bad time...
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