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Updated again: I finally had the time to reply some of your reviews. Part two is now around 6 mins long & will be coming out around early May.
Updated: Wow I can't believe I got 3rd place. Thanx for all who supported me. I feel like talking in some freak'n Oscar lol.
Like always, I suck on the voices but this is the first part of my mind-exploding thing but before I do that, I've to do that boring main idea part.
I liked it.
Especially "The Matrix" music. It was better than I thought. I liked the style and the idea. I think this is the beginning of a great series.
not fucken bad
i liked it a fricken lot, the part with the big lazer was cool and it was pretty well drawn. like u said the voices suck, u cant understand what the ppl r saying and the music is kinda loud. i had to turn my speakers way up to hear the ppl. other then that it rocks!!!!!!!!!!
invader told me about u and im glad he did. that flash was awesome
That's pretty awsome
Only thing I think needs some work is the voice acting, and possibly find away to clean up the sound of the voice overs as well. Other than that, I'm following all your work, I love your style.
Very good, but you need to be bolder
I really like your visual style, I think it's very clean and interesting, a nice change from some of the half-effort stuff I tend to see. The script is amusing and well thought out, but you need to be bolder with your voice acting. You're kinda whisper-shouting when you should be really shouting, get more involved in the characters, and try and be a bit louder and more confident, as well as maybe better recording equipment. The music is well chosen, and all-in-all it was very well done!
The Fine Bros have an announcement.
What happens when a certain Storm trooper got rescued....
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