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Updated again: I finally had the time to reply some of your reviews. Part two is now around 6 mins long & will be coming out around early May.
Updated: Wow I can't believe I got 3rd place. Thanx for all who supported me. I feel like talking in some freak'n Oscar lol.
Like always, I suck on the voices but this is the first part of my mind-exploding thing but before I do that, I've to do that boring main idea part.
It's hard to come across good sprites like these, good work.
yo that was a really good animation! I loved how the characters had an anime air about them. Really cool, and awesome story so far. :)
i like the graphics
maybe if you increased the frame rate it would get a higher score, 20 isnt the best choice for something this good. Good job neways,
~(tilde! My favorite!) Dubs
Wow, that was great!! Just a couple of things...
You're really really talented, and I liked the story. But you should try to be more clear about telling the story - ie: make the plot points and what's going on much more explicit, and flow a bit better from one to the next. For example, during the scene where the red lazer was pointed at the character's forehead I wasn't clear exactly how those characters fit into the plot, or exactly where the lazer was being aimed from. It was just a little too fast. But good job overall. and nice animations!
I like the graphics, the story, the voices are actually pretty good.
A starving village ask a water spirit to help them.
Strawberry clock forgets his ticket on the train but maybe he'll be ok
a clock day story
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