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Mars Conspiracy (Chptr06)

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Apr 16, 2004 | 12:17 AM EDT
  • Daily 3rd Place April 17, 2004

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Chapter 06: Marcia.

THE SERIES THIS DIVIDED IN ELEVEN CHAPTERS. (SELECT "OTHER SUBMISSIONS BY MIGUEL SOLIZ").

ENJOY OUR MOVIE!!

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repenterrepenter

Rated 4 / 5 stars

Nice Work

I can't believe my eyes was this chapter shorter than the others???????? Any way this chapter had a lot of suspense will everything going on. I really liked that this chapter had moremovment of your characters. I liked the detial you put on the machine that the girl had. I fill a little love about to go down I guess I'll have to watch the seventh chapter to find out. The part about the cuffs discharging was very creative, I like that. To chapter seven yeah.



j00biej00bie

Rated 4.5 / 5 stars

Plot thickens.

I'm not sure if I'm right about Ariel, but I think I know whats goin on... it's only a bit confusing, har har har...
I would have to agree with some other people about the rigid voice acting in previous reviews, but it is mainly the brown haired female who has the most concern... fire that voice actor! hah!
The suspense is getting more and more suspensefullness as it goes...
Onward to Number 7!



aznph8playaaznph8playa

Rated 4 / 5 stars

Wow I love this story

This is really an amazing story line. I'm happy I decided to read it regardless of the language and subtitles.



XwaynecoltXXwaynecoltX

Rated 5 / 5 stars

((( WOW )))

All the daily features you are winning must be great, congrats on all the success, the file size i could argue you about and alot of 56k-ers but still well worth it all, nice job, i love this series...

~X~



norse-zealotnorse-zealot

Rated 4 / 5 stars

excellent

very good, the story is going pretty smoothly and there is just enought action. But, what the hell was that robot-double-minigun-flying thing. it looked a lot more developed than the human technology.