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give me some tipps or so please...(i know the graphix are not so good but i drew it withe the mouse with the right hand [i'm lefthanded])..sorry my english i came from Austria
It was nice for my tastes.
Alright, I like your submission. For me, the graphics were great (I can't wait for you to get a left-handed mouse, seeing that the graphics pleased me). Now, here are some tips. First, you probably should think about placing dialouge into your submission, and a little plot. Second, maybe you could add some eyes and facial details, to make the character more expressive (you know, like a man crying just before he gets shot or something like that. And last, some background music would liven it up a bit. This is going to my favorites. I look forward to you.
you wanted tips, ill give you tips.
* when the bullet hits the guys head, make the bullet dissapear untill it comes out the other side
* make the characters move when theyre flying through the air
*when the guy standing against the wall gets hit, he should at least flinch
good luck w\ your next one :)
it wasn't very entertaining
havent i seen this in a movie somewhere?
i feel like im watching a flash back of the matriz dosent realy have a plot but i was bored :D
im suprised. you said in the thing the graphics arent that good well...there actually pretty damn good compared to a lot of other shit on the portal that has higher score than this one. i want to see more, like you using ur left hand. ^^ good job
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