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June 2007: Still can't believe I did this six years ago...
but what means "online" ?
are there some "offline scenes ?"
Your animation is substandard, and so is your writing. You didn't credit any of your audio, and nobody really likes serials anyway. You have a great sense of style, though, so you should be working on bigger projects, instead of this sort of thing. Try your hand at more planned out projects, and you'll get better with time.
ANIMATION IS VERY SMOOTH
I've watched all your Race of Beings episode's and am very impressed with the animation in your flash. Very smooth and realistic for what they are. I think you may have even taught me a thing or two! Keep it up! :)
That was better then the first one! Your movie only needs one thing. A preloader.
That movie was so impressive. Great movie. No improvements needed.
Plenty of improvements are needed, but i appreciate the kind words anyways, my third episode has better drawings and its longer with more action, so stay tuned.
Blue Pencilmate meets Red Pencilmate, but things don't go so well...
While taking the day off work, Lloyd and Glynis take in a movie
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