Nice Work

This one has to be by far the best one yet. I really liked the suspence in this one. One thing that I didn't know that the blue haired lady was an alien or robot. When she shot the stuff from her head it moved too slow it should have been quicker. This polt for this episode was great I loved every second of . Filled with twists and others great things. Well good job and I can't wait to see what happens in the next six chapters.

Another great!

Wow! Excellent!
The story in this was simply amazing, and even though the file size is raping the living daylights out of my machine, it was well worth it!!!
Even though the series isnt even half-way through, I am really getting hooked to this!
Another well done flash!
The series is really starting to develop, making it so much more interesting! Great work!

Grading them all the same

It's pointless to take each submission seperately since it is one series, the title says the rest.

((( PERFECT )))

Wow the story is amazing even though the file size is killing my machine it was well worth it though, another welldone flash perfectness, cant wait to checkout the rest, great job...

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Terrific

This series is a really good value!