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This is a preview of a long story I would like to animate. I am looking to see if anyone would want to see this whole story and if anyone could give me some tips on things to improve.

Thank you.

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Eh, I'm not really digging this movie. Graphically it's a mixed bag. The drawings are pretty good, but the animations weren't too impressive, especially in some of the violent scenes. Really this movie is just a bunch of random violence with a weak storyline behind it.

...stuff

it was ok, the graphics was quite good but it didnt look right when peoples heads were blown off so try to work on that...

Feh.

Wow a cop killer how very original. Dun bother with a series about him you can find a lot of the same thing on NGs right now. It's nice the cops missed him at point blank too. You should try asking in a forum or something not waisting anyone's time with this thing to ask for help on a flash. Boo.

As usally

The grapics aint bad just the blood :p Haha

The concept is excellent.

It is a great idea. Like you said, youir drawing is not that good but i'll just give you a tip anyway, when the brother turns his head, it looks really fucked. You need to give it some depth, other than that it was alright. Also, when he shoots the cops, there heads shouldnot just randomly explode. We should get a shot of an eye shooting off or the head on the ground. And the blood on the walls looks too neat. It looks as if someone painted it carfully. It should be splashed and blotchy. One thing I don't understand, is how the two cos with guns don't hit the guy when they are standing right behind him. Other than that, the storyline is great and i can see a interesting series coming out of this. Keep up the good work!

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2,500
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Score
3.04 / 5.00

Uploaded
Apr 4, 2004
10:41 PM EDT